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Catwhohas15tails

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PostSubject: The Predator   The Predator Icon_minitimeFri Apr 11, 2008 11:11 am

Not your average balto/Predator crossover.


Kodi discovers abandoned equipment that is used by a Predator. He takes it home and fixes the armor up and becomes "The Predator". His abilitys are exactly the same as a regular predator and uses his skills for good. Most of all, he wants to protect his crush, dusty from a powerful darkness. The Predator can not fight alone so more predators join his side (The dark force and the predators are already in a war). Will they win? Will Kodi tell his secrets to dusty? Find out.


This is a romantic/epic/comedy/drama


Part 1: Armor


"Why cant I stop thinking about her?" kodi asked to himself as he walked in the forest. He was think of dusty, his sweet heart. He continued to walk until... "OWWWWIIEEEE!!!" kodi screamed. He saw something sticking out of the snow. He dug the object up and saw a.... mask of some sort... "Man... what the heck is this?" he asked. He put the mask on and ealized he is using heat sensors! He looed around and then spotted two wrist claws (blades on predators arm). Kodi put them on. "Woah!!" he shouted. He found a whole bunch of other stuff and dicided to take it home and he did.


To be continued....

Sorry if its a little short, not much time to write today


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PostSubject: Re: The Predator   The Predator Icon_minitimeFri Apr 11, 2008 11:24 am

Sounds good, i want to read more Smile
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PostSubject: Fanfic   The Predator Icon_minitimeFri Apr 11, 2008 7:05 pm

Like it so far Hope to read the continuing story Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: The Predator   The Predator Icon_minitimeMon Apr 21, 2008 10:22 am

Part 2: testing and getting yelled at


Kodi arrived home at about 10:00 at night and jenna was uber pissed at kodi. "KODIAK LIONHEART!" jenna called. "Crap... im in trouble." kodi thought as he cramed his tresure under his seat of his corvette. He got out of his car and went to face his mother. "Your in trouble mister!" she gritted. "Sorry im late, traffic... it gets bad sometimes." kodi replied. Jenna shook her head and went back to the kitchen. "Hey mom, ive got some stuff to unload real quick!" kodi called. "Ok, just go to bed when your done, its your first day of school tommarow." she replied.




Kodi went outside and snuck the armor inside


To be continued....
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